In my days and my nights,
and from the dawn to the dusk;
In my past and the present,
and in every bit of my essence;
Your fragrance I inhale by which
my smile enhance.
In the right and the wrong,
and in the rhymes and the songs;
In the stories and the poetries,
and in my mind and my heartbeat;
Your presence follow me everywhere
like the shadow in the scorching heat.
How can one separate us?
When you have dissolved in me
like the deadly venom.
The more they try the more venom spreads.
The more they try the more venom spreads.
How can one distant us?
When its not our body but
our souls entangled.
The more they separate us,
the more tangled gets our soul's threads.
In every thought that I think
and the air that I breathe.
I feel you within me and also around,
intoxicating and giving me
the immense passion that seethe.
First of all, I am so delighted to read a new poem from you after such a long time and I have to say it was worth the wait. :)
ReplyDeleteIntoxication is a perfect word to describe this poem. The emotions involved are so pure and beautiful, they aren't intoxicated at all. I have a few favorite verses from the poem but can't seem to single out my most favorite, love them all. :)
Welcome back, Sonia. Please write more often. I know this is coming from a guy who himself doesn't write so often but still please don't make your fans wait for this long for your next post. :D
Hey that's really sweet of you Akshay.. Thank u so much.. Your comment never fail to bring a smile on my face.
DeleteYes, it was a long gap, indeed.. Your words have encouraged me completely now. So I will definitely try to write more often ;)
And thanks for continuously reminding me to write a new post. I think only because of you and Saru Di's motivation I am able to write something new :)
Cheers
Wow ... this is so beautiful ... loved the poem !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Green Specks.. Its an honor as its coming from a writer like you..
DeleteBy chance came across your blog after so long. So glad i did. Wonderful poem sonia, for the future hubby?. Keep it up :-)
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Thank You Shruthi:)
DeleteMiss You.. Where are you these days???
bangalore only :-)
DeleteWonderful poem! Hope u r doing well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ria.. Yeah I am doing good.. How about you? Long time..
DeleteAaah... welcome back Sonia...long time, eh?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem Sonia.. think its very raw n unadulterated.. very pure
Good read Sonia! :)
Thanks Raj.. Yeah it is quite a long time.. Was stuck in something.. Well, thanks for the visit :)
DeleteAmazing sonia :) Just awesome
ReplyDeleteI loved these lines a lot
How can one distant us?
When its not our body but
our souls entangled.
if you permit me I will use few of the lines for a V-day competition :D in my friends circuit.
Loved it completely :D
Hey Thank You Ramya.. :)
DeleteAnd why not?? You can definitely use the lines for the V-day competition. I would be glad if my little work would help you in some way.. Good luck :)
That's a lovely poem. Body to Body, Soul to Soul. Someone is playing a perfect muse to you Sonia ;)
ReplyDeleteAhhh.. U made me blush :D
DeleteBut honestly there's nothing of that sort..
Thank u :)
Yeah and I believe you ;)
DeleteLOL :)
DeleteI love the intensity of emotions and thanks a lot Sonie for the beautiful words which define it perfectly...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sneha :) Thanks for reading :)
DeleteWonderful poem.Very nice..:-)
ReplyDeleteHey Thanks a lot :)
DeleteIt's N-I-C-E!!! B-)
ReplyDeleteStay Blessed ^_^
Thank u Guy in the mirror:)
DeleteBeautiful words!Love each and every word...indeed,intoxication!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Zarnab.. Glad u liked it:)
Deletevisiting you after a long time :) BEAUTIFUL!!
ReplyDeleteThank Divya:)
DeleteNow after reading this poem it leaves the reader intoxicated!
ReplyDeleteThank u Fayaz :)
DeleteBeautiful poem
ReplyDeletethanks
Thank u:)
DeleteVery passionate writing, Sonia:)
ReplyDeleteThank Rahul JI:)
DeleteHow can one separate us when you have dissolved in me"
ReplyDeleteLoved the beauty of the lines!!!
I love these lines too :)
Deleteperfect poem ,last paragrah is too good..great :)
ReplyDeleteThank u Anu :)
DeleteWonderful piece of writing Sonia! Lovely flow of the words and reflecting pain, I guess, you wrote this while keeping your mother in mind. Correct me if I am wrong. When your writing is evolving, I dont think that giving so much gap is justified. Keep on writing, keep on posting beautiful post.
ReplyDeleteKeep rocking!
:)
ReplyDeleteHey Thanks a lot Mithlash. No not my mother but since a long time I wanted to write something on Meera's feelings for lord Krishna. Every time I wrote I could never justice it. This poem is the outcome of that. I hope someday I will be able to write something more convincing and which as more depth in it. :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank u Rupert :)
DeleteFast moving poem.. Very well written. Keep it up :)
ReplyDeleteHey Sonia. First time here, and really good to read this wonderful poem. Very intense, passionate and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHow can one separate us?
When you have dissolved in me
like the deadly venom.
Loved those lines esp.
long long time no new post :( come back :)
ReplyDeletelong time no new post? is everything alright at your end? come back :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it !
ReplyDeletefabulous ^_^
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