Finding its way slowly
through the ears,
Ripples of magic
spreads through out.
Intimating with every
senses, like an elixir,
Heals each wound, pushes
every hidden pain out.
Smoothening the inner
toughness,
Caresses every single inch
inside.
Intruding in the heart,
runs through the veins,
Forgive the sins, soothes
the mind.
Passing through the
layers of the mind,
Cleansing each layer,
reaches the soul.
Soul now immersed in
its magical vibe,
Dances with stride,
and hence purifies.
Es sind sehr schöne Zeilen geworden, finde ich. Du solltest weiter machen...
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Hey Thank u so much for the kind words of yours..I don't understand German so just translated ur comment and got to know what it meant:) Thanks for the encouragement :)
DeleteA perfect justice for being a true devotee of music.... very beautifully written sonia... loved it :)
ReplyDeleteHey Sur Thanks dear.. U are the one who encourages me every time whatever I do.. Thank u so much for the support..
DeleteA musical post....:)
ReplyDelete:) Yeah
DeleteSonia, I love this poem, very beautiful. I know when someone says, "This is my first time..." you will get comments like, "It doesn't look like this is your first attempt at all...."
ReplyDeleteBut I have to say, this is brilliant. My favorite post of yours. :))
Hey Thank u so much Akshay.. U brought a big smile on my face by these lovely comment of yours :) You know it right, that when ever we try something new and post it here then there is some kinda fear but such lovely words as a comment give the encouragement and helps to write something more.. Thank u so much once again:)
DeleteNice post, for a beginner(in poetry :p :p), I would say that was good poetry Sonia. I have been trying to do the same for quite some time without much luck :/
ReplyDeleteI do agree about the part regarding music. Even I feel the same and it is the best stress buster for me.
Keep posting :) :) :)
Hey Thank u so much Jay.. U r so right, Music is really a stress buster :) I am glad u liked it :)
DeleteIts beautiful Sonia.. really, really beautiful.. think music is just like that.. think the picture completed it for me :)
ReplyDeleteThank u Raj.. Glad u liked it:)
DeleteFirst time? you sure or not?! :) I love it, it's so beautiful and true! Music is really a magic that will chase away the pain! :))
ReplyDeleteXOXO!
Hehe.. Tanks Fida.. Yeah My first time and I am really glad u liked it :) Thank u so much.. XOXO :)
DeleteInnocent outcome of an honest effort! Even those who don't like music that much, will start loving it after reading this poem of yours :)
ReplyDeleteHow sweet of U Sneha:) Thank u so much..
DeleteYour poetry is awesome never stop.
ReplyDeletehey thank u Enigma.. I ll surely try:)
DeleteMagical, purifying vibes, true Sonia:) Lovely rhyming words!
ReplyDeleteThank u so much Rahulji :)
Deletelove it love it love it!
ReplyDeleteNeed I say more:)
OMG... This is a lot for me Di.. love x 3 from a queen of poems to my first poem has made me fly to the cloud 9 :) Thank u so much :)
Deletehmmmm...so nice..i love it
ReplyDeleteThanks Raju :)
DeleteLovely!! :)
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteEvery word of yours was so serenely soothing to the senses. That was brilliantly written. The poem sent me into a magical trance with your words rhyming up in perfect resonance! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteWow.. I loved your comment.. Saru Di was so right.. Your comments are more beautiful then the post itself:)
DeleteWOW! I never thought you could write this level of poetry. Believe me every line of this poem is so profound, so meaningful and so true.So every line of this poem is favorite of mine.Yes Music has all the magic to heal any soul. Sonia this time you surprised me and the fact is that for the very first time I am feeling jealous of you. Maitain this rytham...
ReplyDeleteBest of luck!keep writing and keep surprising like this :)
Awww.. Thank u sooooo much Mithlash.. Even I am surprised that this little piece of work is been liked by the great poets like you and Saru Di.. Ur's and Di's comment have enhanced the beauty if my poem:) Thank u so very much:)
Deletewow... i think with this poem, the UNESCO should make you their ambassador to promote music :) wonderful... keep going :)
ReplyDeleteLOL.. Brand Ambassador for promoting music huh? Great compliment:) Thank u Israr:)
DeleteMusical, lyrical, magical :) ..loved it Sonia. Fantastic composition.
ReplyDeleteOn the contrary, people enjoy music when in good mood and often understand the lyrics when not.
Pardon my late arrival here :)
Der aaye durust aye Mak :) Thanks for the compliments :)
Deletevery nice sonia///
ReplyDeleteHey Ruchi.. Thanks Girl :)
Delete..beautiful, Sonia! Lovely..:)
ReplyDeleteThank u Amit ji :)
DeleteFirst time ? Well a great promise of things to come !! As some one said," Honhaar birwan ke......"
ReplyDeleteHehe.. Shukriya :)
DeleteI am not a great poet or a judge at that, but this one touched. A very simple and elegant way to convey a refreshing feeling :)
ReplyDeleteThank u Shubham :)
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