Friday, 20 January 2012

Jasbaat...


Shabd tere sunn ke, mein ek geet bann jau!
Khusboo teri leke kasturi bann jau!
Saanse teri chuke, mein fir se ji jau!
Chabi teri dekh ke, mein ek darpan bann jau!
Aahat teri mehsus kar ke, baasuri mein bann jau!
Chule bas ek baar mujhe,
umar bhar ke liye teri Poojaran bann jau!



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29 comments:

  1. Mithlash21 January 2012 at 01:06

    Superb! Awesome!& Fabulous! I never expected this kind of shock from your blog. Its entirely different from your post aur wo bhi Hindi mein. All creation shows the devotion of the girl towards him. Aisi devotion aaj kal dekhne ko nahi milti. Phir bhi Sonia You rocks!!! Keep writing:)

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  2. Sonia21 January 2012 at 01:27

    Oh my goodness.. Thank u sooooo much Mithlash. This is the first time I have tried to write something like this. And your appreciation is just too much for this. I owe you. Being from South India and with Mother tongue Konkani, I was conscious about writing in Hindi. Well, I m really glad that u liked it:) Thank u once again:)

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  3. Mithlash21 January 2012 at 04:32

    How come your Hindi is good...lots of people here are from south India n I know how they speak Hindi but here you writing in Hindi..hats off to you...:)

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  4. PhilO♥21 January 2012 at 06:12

    This was amazing! I have never been able to write anything in hindi :P

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  5. Sonia22 January 2012 at 21:12

    Thanks Mithlash and ♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ :)

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  6. Neha23 January 2012 at 00:11

    Superb poetry. You reminded me of days when I wrote in Hindi too...and now, I am one of those who rarely even writes :(

    Keep writing...nothing more soothing to the soul as this. :)

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  7. Sonia23 January 2012 at 01:17

    Hey Neha thank u so much for the appreciation:)

    My efforts to write first Hindi poem has got an award by all ur compliments. And it also made me more confident to try writing some more :)

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  8. PhilO♥23 January 2012 at 01:40

    Thank You so much for the comment :)

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  9. Raj23 January 2012 at 07:41

    Beautifully written. Very soulful. :) And you managed to convey such a deep thought in so few words.

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  10. Sonia23 January 2012 at 21:07

    @Raj: Thanks Raj and Hindi is the beautiful language which is the best to express the thoughts in very few words:) Thanks for following:)

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  11. Rià25 January 2012 at 05:13

    Those were some beautiful lines. Very deep.

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  12. Sonia27 January 2012 at 01:25

    Thank u ♥●• İzdihër •●♥ and Rià.. Glad that u liked it :-)

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  13. PhilO♥27 January 2012 at 02:25

    @ your comment: I think sad endings are required in life at times to make us strong :)

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  14. aishwarya28 January 2012 at 01:28

    ohhh...i couldn't understand a word:(

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  15. Sonia28 January 2012 at 01:50

    @aishwarya: *Tears* Hmmm i know its quite difficult for South Indians to understand Hindi. Evn I m a South Indian but still my love for dis language is too much.. Hindi is such a wonderful language and every Indian should know it dear.. Please try to give some importance to this divine language and just feel the magic of the power of the language:)

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  16. (mymoonlog)29 January 2012 at 02:43

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  17. Saru Singhal29 January 2012 at 07:31

    You just made my Sunday with this post. Please pen more like these...Love love love it:)

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  18. Sonia29 January 2012 at 21:08

    @Saru Singhal: OMG... The queen of words Saru is saying these words for my post.. I am really so very glad for that.. I will try to write some more for sure dear:)
    *Love*

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  19. Elvirah31 January 2012 at 04:22

    What a beautiful poetry! It felt so fascinating and wonderful reading each line of your poetry - Jasbat.

    http://www.rachelspassion.blogspot.com

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  20. --31 January 2012 at 19:55

    Wish I understood Hindi :-) Is it possible for me to read an English translation? I have been told that the poetry would lose it's meaning if you do that?

    Just passing by to say hello and see if there are any new posts. I didn't comment on this one previously because of the language barrier :'(

    See you soon *hugs*

    P.S. ~ I've never received a 'love x 3' from Saru, so you are definitely doing something right Sonia! *Big Smiles*

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  21. Sonia31 January 2012 at 21:54

    @Elvirah : Glad to know that u liked it:) Thanks for following:)

    ~*Princesa Fiona*~: That's really so sweet of u.. Even tough u did not understand d language ur comment is so beautiful dear.. Thank u soo much:)

    Love

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  22. ✿Sie✿31 January 2012 at 23:06

    Hello Sonia..just passing by again..I love to leave a comment on your recent post but I couldn't understand uhuhuhu..anyways I'll be waiting for your next post *hugs* ;)

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  23. Megha Sarin7 February 2012 at 00:52

    I love it but My Hindi aint good at all too though I am from north
    Keep up the good work!
    Love the title too :)

    Love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  24. Neha Shandilya27 February 2012 at 08:08

    Simply beautiful :)

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  25. Akshay Kumar G9 May 2012 at 02:57

    Oh how come I never came across this post? It is so beautiful Sonia. Loved it. :)

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    1. Sonia9 May 2012 at 03:08

      Oh Thank u Akshay.. This is my first poetry and my favorite as I have written it with all my heart :) Glad u liked it:)

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